第1篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
窗
Random Thoughts on the Window
钱钟书
By Qian Zhongshu
又是春天，窗子可以常开了。春天从窗外进来，人在屋子里坐不住，就从门里出去。
It is spring again and the window can be left open as often as one would like. As spring comes in through the windows, so people -- unable to bear staying inside any longer -- go outdoors.
不过屋子外的春天太贱了!到处是阳光，不像射破屋里阴深的那样明亮;到处是给太阳晒得懒洋洋的风，不像搅动屋里沉闷的那样有生气。
The spring outside, however, is much too cheap, for the sun shines on everything, and so does not seem as bright as that which shoots into the darkness of the house. Outside the sun-sloshed breeze blows everywhere, but it is not so lively as that which stirs the gloominess inside the house.
就是鸟语，也似乎琐碎而单薄，需要屋里的寂静来做衬托。我们因此明白，春天是该镶嵌在窗子里看的，好比画配了框子。
Even the chirping of the birds sounds so thin and broken that the quietness of the house is needed to set it off. It seems that spring was always meant to be put behind a windowpane for show, just like a picture in a frame.
同时，我们悟到，门和窗有不同的意义。当然，门是造了让人出进的。但是，窗子有时也可作为进出口用，譬如小偷或小说里私约的情人就喜欢爬窗子。
At the same time it also becomes clear that the door has a different significance from the window. Of course, doors were made for people to pass through; but a window can also sometimes serve as an entrance or as an exit, and is used as such by thieves and by lovers in novels.
所以窗子和门的根本分别，决不仅是有没有人进来出去。若据赏春一事来看，我们不妨这样说：有了门，我们可以出去;有了窗，我们可以不必出去。
In fact the fundamental difference between a door and a window has nothing to do with them being either entrances or exits. When it comes to the admiration of spring, it could be put this way: a door makes it possible for one to go out, whereas a window makes it possible for one not to have to.
窗子打通了大自然和人的隔膜，把风和太阳逗引进来，使屋子里也关着一部分春天，让我们安坐了享受，无需再到外面去找。
A window helps to pull down the partition between man and nature. It leads breezes and sunlight in, and keeps part of the spring in the house. It allows one to sit and enjoy the spring in peace, and makes it unnecessary to go looking for it outside.
第2篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
语言包装能够让语言生色不少，所以考前准备常见的语言包装技巧也相当重要。有很多方面都能提升自己的语言质量：比如长句扩充，短句融合，长短句结合，词汇多样性;强调句，倒装句，分词结构和插入语都是非常出色的语言，可以大大增加文章的可读性，也能够满足雅思写作的高分标准，即词汇的多样性和语法结构的多样性。
词汇多样性即准备常见的雅思写作中高频使用的表达法，比如重要、比较、破坏、进展、吸引等表达法。句型多样性上面也给大家举了一些例子，下面以分词为例，给大家做一个简单介绍如何准备语言包装技能。
假设考试会写两个很简单的主谓宾的句子，通过分词结构可以融合成一个长句，这个过程也是可以模块化的：A do1. A do2. 我们可以表达成doing1, A do2. 这样一个本来很短的两个句子融合在一起了，而且使用了复杂的分词句型，表达更具有可读性。例如I get up in the morning. I go to school happily. 可以转化成: getting up in the morning, I go to school happily. 如果要想再升一级，可以把分词作为插入语，即变成A, doing1, do2.更加增强语言质量。
雅思写作观点如何找：权利自由原则
动物：
It is a breach of their natural rights to take them by force into captivity for our own purposes.
Animals have the right to be treated as beings of value in themselves, not as the means to human ends.
死刑：
The right to life is inviolable and protected by law.
One human right is the right to life and taking a life away by execution is cruel, inhumane and degrading.
极限运动：
People should be free to participate in activities with others as long as it does not affect the safety of non-participants.
摄像机：
They feel that being watched constantly is like being in a jail, and that ordinary people are losing their freedom because of these devices.
强迫老年人退休：
Compulsorily retiring old employees can affect the older individual’s freedom - and right - to work and can deprive society of valuable experience and insights.
禁酒：
Banning alcohol infringes people’s civil liberties to an unacceptable degree.
禁烟：
While a government has a responsibility to protect its population, it also has a responsibility to defend their freedom of choice.
新闻审查：
Banning advertisements is a severe restriction upon freedom of speech.
We have accepted that freedom of expression should have limits.
The risks of stifling free expression far outweigh the potential for unacceptable material.
An individual"s rights end when they impinge on the safety and rights of others.
媒体报道名人：
Famous people deserve privacy and respect.
Although, generally speaking, the media should not interfere in people’s private lives, there are times when it is correct to do so.
母亲在家带孩子：
Mothers should have as much freedom as anyone else in society to decide what is best for them and their children.
家庭教育：
If they feel that the child would be best educated at home, by them or by another, that is their right.
控制人口：
They feel that this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves.
分开教育：
Among these opponents are “equal education” advocates, who argue that every student has the same right to enjoying high quality education regardless of gender, race, wealth, and most importantly, regardless of their minor differences in intellectual abilities.
资助艺术：
So-called “elite culture” should be available for all to enjoy, and not just confined to the rich.
雅思写作观点如何找：文化原则
1)文化重要性
捕鲸：
Whale hunting is an important aspect of some people’s cultural heritage.
建筑：
Architecture is part of a country’s cultural heritage.
语言：
Language is a type of cultural heritage.
Language is often seen as a badge of identity and more conflict may be created if the global community is seen to prefer one language to another.
电视：
Television is mostly directed to films and shows that have commercial purposes but little cultural value.
旅游：
It is not purely ecosystems which are damaged by the pressure of consumption (e.g. by sewage output or pressure on water resources), but also ancient monuments or heritage sites.
2)文化多元性
电视：
It changes our society for the worse, making us all conform to a bland, “Hollywood” model of entertainment in which regional traditions and diversity are lost.
语言：
The diversity of languages is endlessly fascinating.
政府资助艺术：
Subsidised companies can afford to take more risks and to experiment, enabling new styles and forms of art to emerge and to become popular.
旅游：
Tourism demands that an area conform to a certain stereotyped image, requiring the local inhabitants to make a caricature of their own culture.
寄宿学校：(多样性)
Spending all your time in school restricts the circle of people you come into contact with.
Interaction with other pupils is a crucial element of a child’s development
体育：
PE is an aspect of school being about more than just book learning – it is about educating the whole person, a holistic education that betters us in an all-round sense, rather than a merely academic experience.
雅思写作观点如何找：道义原则
捕鲸：
Killing whales for human use is morally wrong.
Modern whaling is humane, especially compared to the factory farming of animals like chickens, cow and pigs, (themselves a relatively intelligent and social species).
捕猎：
Traditional hunting methods are often particularly cruel.
Overall, however, the essential point is that it is morally wrong to kill animals for pleasure and no amount of economic benefits can make that right.
动物试验：
We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity.
Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animals in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults.
治疗还是教育：
Obviously, there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early as possible.
雅思写作观点如何找：教育原则
电视：
Many scientific and cultural programs are shown on television, which give new educational opportunities for our society.
动物园：
Zoos nowadays are not marketed as places of entertainment - they are places of education.
博物馆免费：
Free and cheap access to the arts is crucial for education.
死刑：
By executing criminals you are ruling out the possibility of rehabilitation.
Some criminals are beyond rehabilitation;
怎样控制人口：
This could be done by a process of education that points out the way a small family can mean an improved quality of life for the family members, as well as less strain on the country’s, perhaps very limited, resources.
童工：
If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children’s development.
课外活动：
If they cannot play make-believe games, how can they develop their imagination? How can they learn physical co-ordination or learn important social lessons about winning and losing if they do not practice any sports?
第3篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
Traveling abroad has become a new lifestyle nowadays. However, complaints about the potential negative effects of international travel have been sparked among the public in recent years. This essay will outline two main reasons for these complaints and provide certain measures to change the opinion.
如今，出国旅行已成为一种新的生活方式。然而，近年来，公众对国际旅行可能产生的负面影响的抱怨已经在公众中引发了。本文将概述这些投诉的两个主要原因，并提出一些改变意见的措施。
First of all, it is a widespread phenomenon that foreign travelers might repel the local community because of their inappropriate languages and behavior in some resorts. Due to the cultural differences, visitors’ behavior may break traditional rules in travel destinations sometimes. For example, a visitor will annoy an Indian when he passes food by his left hand. For this reason, the local government can take actions to provide more specific travelling tips in popular scene spots for foreign travelers.
首先，这是一个普遍的现象，外国游客可能会排斥当地社区，因为他们在一些旅游胜地的语言和行为不恰当。由于文化差异，游客的行为有时会打破旅游目的地的传统规则。例如，当一个印度人用左手递食物时，会惹怒印度人。出于这个原因，当地政府可以采取行动，为外国游客提供更具体的旅游景点。
In addition, more and more transnational travels will cause damage to the unique nature of a culture. Foreign visitors will bring not only tangible matters like food and clothes but also something intangible, such as their festivals or customs. In other words, these visitors are assimilating their country’s culture while they are traveling abroad, which will be bound to cause antipathy in racist society. Germany is a case in point. For this reason, the government can encourage locals to hold a tolerant attitude toward foreign arrivals as they have no common knowledge of local conventions in most times. Traveling is for cultural communication instead of invasion.
此外，越来越多的跨国旅行将对一种文化的独特性质造成损害。外国游客不仅会带来诸如食物和衣服之类的有形物品，还会带来一些无形的东西，比如他们的节日或习俗。换句话说，这些游客在国外旅游时，正在吸收他们国家的文化，这势必会引起种族主义社会的反感。德国就是一个很好的例子。出于这个原因，政府可以鼓励当地人对外国游客保持宽容的态度，因为他们在大多数时候都不了解当地的习俗。旅行是为了文化交流而不是入侵。
In conclusion, breaking conventions and cultural uniqueness are the two main factors leading to the bias regarding international tourism. Both governments and individuals should make an effort to change this phenomenon.
总之，打破常规和文化独特性是导致国际旅游偏见的两个主要因素。政府和个人都应该努力改变这种现象。
第4篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
雅思写作中的保证词组啦，用上它不用怕写作分会低于6月。
1 随着经济的快速发展 with the rapid development of economy
2 提高人民的生活水平improve people’s living standard
3 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4 面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5 人们普遍认为 it is commonly believed/ recognized that …
6 社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7 引起了广泛的公共关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8 不可否认 it is undeniable that…/ there is no denying that
9 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11 完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12 一些人….而另一些人… some people … while others …
13 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as I am concerned/ personally
14 就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on …
15 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16 双方的论点 argument on both sides
17 发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in
18 对…必不可少 be indispensable to
19 正如言语所说 as the proverb goes
20 … 也不例外 …. be no exception
21 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on …
22 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages
23 导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25 责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29 经济/ 心理负担 financial burden/ psychological burden
30 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32 做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33 对… 有益 be beneficial/ conductive to ….
34 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for ….
36 综合素质 comprehensive quality
37 无可非议 blameless/ beyond reproach
38 无法想象 beyond imagination/ unimaginable
39 致力于/ 投身于 be committed/ devoted to ….
40 应当承认 admittedly
41 不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of ….
43 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
45 网络 the Internet
46 方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47 在人类生活的方面面 in all aspects of human life
48 环保的 environmentally friendly
49 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50 科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52 支持前/ 后种观点的人 people/ those in favor of the former/ latter opinion
53 有/提供如下理由/证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree/ in some way
55 理论与实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56 …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of ….
57 日益激烈的社会竞争 an increasingly fierce social competition
58 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59 长远利益 interest in the long run
60 …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62 取其精髓，去其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs
63 对…有害 do harm to/ be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with/ catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …
66 采取有效措施来…. Take effective measures to do sth
67 …的健康发展 the healthy development of ….
68 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides. No garden without weeds.
69 对…观点因人而异 Views on… vary from person to person
70 重视 attach great importance to ….
71 社会地位 social status
72 把时间和经历放在…上 focus time and energy on …
73 扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74 身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75 有直接/间接关系 be directly/ indirectly related to ….
76 提出折中建议 set forth a compromise proposal
77 可取代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth
80 与…比较 compared with …/ in comparison with
81 相反 in/ by contrast; on the contrary
82 代替 replace/ substitute/ take the place of
83 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis
84 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86 毫无疑问 undoubtedly/ there is no doubt that
87 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88 充分利用 make full use of/ make the most use of
89 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91 更多地强调 put more emphasis on….
92 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true
94 主要的理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:
95 首先 at first, firstly, to begin with
96 其次 secondly, in the second place
97 再次 besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore
98 最后 finally, last but not the least, above all, lastly
99 总而言之 all in all, to sum up, in summary, in a word
100 我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go
第5篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
很多中国考生雅思写作得到较低分数，其中一个很重要的原因就是里面犯了大量的语法错误，这里讲给大家列出一个check list，希望同学们在练习完自己的文章以后针对这几个方面给自己做改错练习，长期训练将有效提高各位考生的写作质量：
名词：名词的可数单数一定不能单独存在。注意单复数等基本问题。
动词：时刻注意“与时俱进”，任何时候用动词都要想清楚时态的使用。被动的结构不要出错，虚拟语气的动词使用也要格外注意，不要出错。
句子结构方面：一定要注意句子结构完整性，不要出现run-on句子，一个句子只能有一个动词，每加一个动词就要加一个连词，注意关系代词和副词的正确使用。非谓语动词使用时注意主被动关系。
修饰关系：动词和形容词一定要用副词修饰，这个至关重要，很多考生犯错误。
其他的小语法方面：主谓一致，序数词和计数词，代词和介词的使用正确性。
第6篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
如何填实中间段落的内容，主要从两个方面入手，一个是要掌握常见题目的观点以及论据，另一个是要掌握常见的论证手段。下面分别做简单介绍。
常见观点的准备是非常重要的，一定要针对雅思考试常考查的话题做考前总结，做到熟悉话题，针对话题能够提出相应的观点，并且能自如的用英语表达相关的观点和例子。常见的考试话题范围做如下总结和归纳，希望考生考前做好应对准备：animal experiments; censorship; compete or play; youth drug abuse; e-book or p-book; female juvenile crime; intelligent machines replacement; mandatory retirement age; overweight; corporal punishments; littering problems; evaluate and criticize teachers; cities are becoming lager; the Olympic games; TV and children; vegetarian diet or eating meat; honest and white lies; taking a gap year; capital punishment; job-hopping; censorship of the internet; the disappearance of language and culture; marijuana; government subsidize artists and musicians.
这里给大家罗列了常见的话题，大家做好充分的准备是非常有必要的，可以每个话题通过同意和反对或者现象解释解决等角度总结常见的词汇和表达。
当然准备一些通用性的观点也是非常有必要的，比如各位考生在考试没有太充分准备的观点是可以从如下几个方面加以考虑的：经济、时间、健康、方便、心理、感情、权利、环境、文化和道德。
提出观点后剩下的是需要论证观点了，要掌握常见的论证手段：比如数据说明、实验结果、引用权威、逸闻趣事、实际事例、调查采访等等。这些段落也需要模块化，事先做好充分的准备，考试的时候可以直接使用模块，替换内容即可。下面以引用权威的名人名言为例给大家做一个简单介绍：
To illustrate it profoundly and comprehensively, I would like to cite what one of my favorite writers Francis Bacon ever mentioned: Histories make men wise; poems witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend. We can easily build up an accurate picture of implications behind his/her words.
考试可以按照需要替换内容，从而达到模块化过程。其他的例子限于篇幅不一一展开，这里主要呈现一个基本思路。
第7篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
It is said that advertising is so influential that it persuade people to become similar with each other. I believe this statement is a bit overstated.
据说，广告的影响力如此之大，以至于它能说服人们彼此变得相似。我认为这个说法有些夸张。
First of all, it is unfair to blame advertisements for the popularity of some certain products amongst consumers. For example, using iPhone and other electric devices has become increasingly popular throughout the world, especially in China. What are the reasons? I think it is because of its good selling points and designs instead of the commercials. While some mightcounter that some target consumers are vulnerable, such as children and teenagers, and they might be persuaded to purchase similar items, I believe it seldom happens since these days young people are longing for distinctive appearance and individuality.
首先，将某些产品的受欢迎程度归咎于消费者中的某些产品是不公平的。例如，iPhone和其他电子设备在世界各地越来越受欢迎，尤其是在中国。的原因是什么?我认为这是由于它的卖点和设计，而不是广告。虽然有些人可能会认为有些目标消费者很脆弱，比如儿童和青少年，他们可能会被说服购买类似的商品，但我相信这很少发生，因为现在年轻人渴望独特的外表和个性。
Secondly, it is truly less likely for consumers to make similar choices with the help of commercials. By viewing a variety of advertisements broadcasted on TV or billboard, people are informed of different choices in terms of prices, designs and patterns. They might fine-tunetheir demand first, comparing the products available on the market, and making wise decisions that satisfy themselves in the end. By contrast, without the advertisement, consumers have no access to discover their real needs and find the better choice, which might lead to uniformity in purchasing decisions.
其次，在广告的帮助下，消费者做出类似选择的可能性确实降低了。通过观看电视或广告牌上播放的各种广告，人们会被告知在价格、设计和图案方面有不同的选择。他们可能会首先调整他们的需求，比较市场上可用的产品，做出最终满足自己的明智决定。相比之下，如果没有广告，消费者就无法发现自己的真实需求，找到更好的选择，这可能会导致购买决策的一致性。
In conclusion, it is the quality of goods rather than their advertisements that attracts consumers. As there are so many kinds of commercials, customers have a wide range of selections, making them become different rather than identical.
总之，吸引消费者的是商品的质量，而不是他们的广告。因为有很多种类的广告，顾客有很多选择，使他们变得不同而不是完全相同。
雅思写作范文及思路点拨：国际旅游是不是一件坏事
雅思写作思路点拨
题目的类型属于report。在段落分配上，可以把理由归为一段，并针对理由的变化为一段或者理由和对应的改变方法为一段。
范文主体思路分析：
原因一：外来游客的行为会激怒当地人，因为他们不遵守当地的习俗
对策一：政府可以在地方做引导，设置文化小贴士
原因二：外来游客的旅行本身也会带来他们国家的文化特征，对于种族意识强烈的国家是一种伤害
对策二：政府可以引导当地人改变想法，对这种行为持宽容态度，旅行更多的只是文化交流
第8篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
雅思高分作文写作步骤有哪些
雅思写作是雅思考试中的重要组成部分，也是雅思考试中的难点和重要得分点，如何写好雅思作文一直是考生要面对的难题，其中掌握写作技巧也是拿高分的关键，下面由出国雅思频道为您提供：雅思高分作文写作步骤，供您参阅学习，欢迎您浏览出国浏览更多资讯
雅思写作高分步骤一， 学习这门语言的基本的词汇和语法。
此时的学习者对这门外语的基本用法还未掌握，因此尚处于学习语言的基础阶段。这时写作训练一般没有，即使有也只是为练习词汇和语法服务。这种练习一般说来内容都非常简单，强调的是学习者所使用的词汇和语法必须正确。词汇-----基础，单词不可不背，但也绝对不能死背词汇。在狂背完词汇的基础上，尽量到阅读中去巩固和体会。
雅思写作高分步骤二， 语言和内容并举。
此时的学习者已经掌握了该语言的一些基本的词汇和语法，可以用该语言表达自己的简单的思想。这时的写作练习可以达到两个目的：
(1)继续增强对语言的掌握;
(2)用外语表达一定的`思想。在具体的学习实践中，这两者实际上是不可分的。有许多初三的学生开始用英语记日记，其实他们就正处于这一阶段。
雅思写作高分步骤三， 主要强调内容。
当学习者对一门外语的词汇和语法有了一定的掌握，可以用它来表达相对复杂的思想时，就基本进入了第三阶段。此时的语言已经不是最大的障碍，怎样写出好的内容成了头等大事。这一阶段的学习者所注重的是怎样选材、怎样组织文章之类的问题。有人说只有这第三阶段的写作才是真正的写作。这一说法可能失之偏颇，但成功的写作是必须达到这第三阶段的。
如果你发觉写出完整的句子尚有困难，这说明你还处于第一阶段。此时你不要急于写出长篇大论，即使你有些想法可能非常深刻。这时你应该做的是注意语言的积累，留意常用词和句型的用法。另外，适当做一些翻译练习也可以帮助你提高运用语言的能力，从而为提高写作能力做好准备。我们的翻译板块中有许多练习实际上对你们的写作能力的提高也是大有裨益的。除此之外，多做一些阅读，培养对语言的感觉也能为提高写作能力做一些准备。
第9篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
雅思写作考试主要体型分类为：IDO模式(introduction discussion opinion即引入观点，正反论证和提出结论)，PES模式(phenomenon explanation solutions 即现象描述，解释说明和问题解决)和issue模式(to what extant do you agree or disagree)。
所以考生在考试前有必要把每个模块的表达句型准备好，最好形成自己的模块，只要考到该考点都用相应的模式去写作，这是第一步。
下面以最常考的issue为例给大家一个范本，以有保留的肯定作为基本立场，在此仅供各位做一个基本的参考：
I agree with the speaker’s broad assertion that…. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to embrace…. My points of contention with the speaker involve…, as discussed below.
I concede that the speaker is on the correct philosophical side of this issue. After all, ….
While…, at the same time we should be circumspect about…. After all,….
The speaker’s assertion is troubling in two other respects as well. First, …. Secondly… . For instance…
In sum, the speaker’s assertion that… begs the question, because…. As for the broader assertion, I agree that…. Nevertheless, …. In the final analysis, given … we are forced to strike a balance in how we ….
当然，这里只是给大家一个例子，究竟如何总结这个框架，和考生平时阅读是分不开的。可以从美文的范文或者官方给出的样文中自己提炼出属于自己的框架，但最重要的是要在平时针对不同的考试题目来反复熟练的使用这个模块，才能保证自己在考场上能够熟悉自如地使用这个写作思路。
第10篇: 雅思大作文写作步骤
雅思写作如何写高分步骤解析
一、分析雅思写作题目
Writing Task 2的问题可分为两类。
第一类问题需要以讨论形式作答，需要讲出正反两面双方的论点和自己的立场。可以设想这是一场辩论比赛，但要为两方发言，考生要写出足够的证据支持自己的论点和反驳对立的论点。
第二类问题是以报告形式作答，需要多描述和发掘有关题目的处境，并不需要太着重写自己的意见，应描述有关题目的处境和发掘事件的成因。虽然并不需要支持正/反一方的论点，但应在真实的处境上提出真实的证据。
二、考虑答案
在考虑答案时，应能想到两个或以上的论据支持自己的论点，这步骤被称为“Brainstorming”。考生可在一张白纸上写下所有在脑中浮现的文字，先不用理会写下的是否有用，可将题目也写在纸上，然后在围绕题目的地方将所写下的文字分门别类。
在第一类问题上，应至少想到2个或以上的支持论据，而在第二类问题上，也应至少想到2个或以上可供讨论的话题，但无论是回答哪一类问题，不建议写超过4个论据或话题，否则由于字数的限制，文章会变得太空泛。
三、计划和组织答案
考生或许没有时间完整写出计划，但必须在心里组织和安排好答案。
主要需要安排好4部份：
1) 题目和问题-要认清题目的要求和找出题目中想问的问题;
2) 介绍-这是用来表达文章的大意，如果要写的是一篇评论文，笔者的方向也要在这里表达出来;
3) 主体-如主体分为三段的话，通常前两段是观点和理由，后一段是用来平衡讨论的相反观点;
4) 结论-会包括一点比较次要的观点。
四、写答案
在一篇250字的文章中，介绍文应占大约40个字而结论文应占大约30个字。当计划好后，便可以开始作答。
1) 介绍(Introduction)
介绍文是一篇文章的“地图”，用来提导读者方向。介绍文中第一句的作用是用来说明整篇文章的总义和介绍文章的主题。之后的一至两句则是用来表达自己的个人意见(评论文)或支持论点的客观事实(报告)，通常介绍文的最后一句是用来引出主体文。
2) 主体(Body)
与介绍文一样，主体文每段的第一句都是用来说明整段的大意，之后的内容可用连接词(如However, Although, Notonly, Also, Even though, Consequently, In addition等等)或顺序词(Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly ...)连贯在一起。
在一篇文章中，连接词尽量不要重复。如提出了一个论点，在同一段落里必须有支持这个论点的理由和证据，每段的最后一句通常用来总结整段的意思。在一篇评论文中，必须有一段相反论点以平衡整个讨论，在这一段里，必须能有理地反驳这些相反论点，讲出为什么要持相反意见。可强烈地、温和地或只是部分地反对。
以下是一些应写在这一段内的建议句子：
Many people…
Others…
Those who disagree believe that ... / may argue that ... /point out that ...
However, I strongly disagree ...
Nothing could be further from the truth (Strongdisagreement) because ...
In fact, ...
... for the following reasons: I find it hard to agree...
Nevertheless, I cannot agree ... (Mild disagreement)
Perhaps this is true, but it cannot be denied that ...
This is partly true, then again ... (Concessionaldisagreement)
3) 结论(Conclusion)
结论文的开始通常都会用一个特别结论句式(In general, To sum up, Toconclude, In conclusion等等)来串联整段。在结论文中，条件句(Conditional sentence) (If....,....)是非常有用的。当然，在文章的其他位置也可以用条件句，使用条件句时，须注意有没有文法错误。
在一篇250字的文章中，结论文通常只能有一至两句。结论只是用来总结文章之前的意思，除非只是一个次要观点，否则不要在这段内提出任何新见解，但如果题目要求的话，可在结论上提出建议、推荐、介绍和解决方法。
雅思写作多样句型应用技巧之插入语
好的雅思写作，除了要保证句法基础正确外，还需要达到句型多样化。也就是说，考生在写作时，应该交替使用各种句型，包括短句、长句以及简单句、复合句、并列句。
根据官方写作要求，雅思写作需要综合使用简单句式和复杂句式，合理运用各种复杂的语法结构。
建议大家在表明自己态度观点和主题句时，使用简单明了的句子为佳，因为短句更加明了。而在引言段和body段的大部分支持句应该使用复杂句型。
接下来，雅思小编为众烤鸭们谈论和分析写作多样化句型的应用之插入语和倒装句。
三、插入语
经常可做插入语的表达包括：therefore, however, in the long run, to some extent, as..., for example, etc.
Students who have part-time jobs can relieve, to some extent, the economic burdens of their parents.
做兼职的学生在某种程度上能减轻他们父母的经济负担。
四、倒装句
Only in this way can the problem be solved successfully.
只有通过这种方法才能成功解决问题。
雅思写作多样句型应用技巧之简单句
1.短句多
如： I like reading novels. They often tell me interesting and moving stories. Some stories are also instructive.
句子过短，简单，不具有吸引力，难取得高分。
2.过度追求复杂句
如：Nowadays, more and more parents pay more attention to their children’s education, which is to pursue academic achievement.
过度的追求使用复杂句会导致句子表达奇怪，甚至晦涩，令人读不懂。
根据官方写作要求，雅思写作需要综合使用简单句式和复杂句式，合理运用各种复杂的语法结构。
建议大家在表明自己态度观点和主题句时，使用简单明了的句子为佳，因为短句更加明了。而在引言段和body段的大部分支持句应该使用复杂句型。
接下来，雅思小编为众烤鸭们谈论和分析写作多样化句型的应用。
雅思写作多样句型应用一、简单句
简单句只包含一个主谓结构，句子的各个成分都是由单词或短语构成。简单句一般比较简单，比较短。但是，这并不是简单句的本质特征，有些简单句也很长，很复杂。
1. 分词做状语或定语
分词有两种形式：现在分词和过去分词。现在分词表主动或正在进行;过去分词表被动或已经完成。
Living far from home, one would suffer from loneliness and homesickness.
离家生活，人们遭受孤独和思乡之苦。
Prompted by the great leap of science and technology, work today is more demanding than it used to be.
受到科技进步的促使，现在的工作比过去要求更高。
A country only depending on its tradition will never become a powerful nation.
一个只依赖自己传统的国家将永远不能成为一个强大的国家。
The commodities and services advertised by super stars tend to enjoy higher sales than those not advertised.
由明星代言的产品和服务比没有广告的销售量更高。
2. 介词短语做状语
With the limited budget, the government is unable to invest much money in art projects.
预算很有限，政府不能投资很多钱在艺术项目上。
3. 有些时候，两个或多个谓语共用一个主语，这样的句子仍然是简单句。
Formal examinations put great stress on students, generate an unhealthy spirit of jealousy and competition, and even bring about psychological problems.
考试给学生带来很大压力，产生不良的嫉妒和竞争感，甚至带来心理问题。
英语写作
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