雅思写作冲刺之写作语法及句型篇1
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Model Answer 1:
I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I believe that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.
For several reasons, I think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. First of all, factories often bring pollution. They are prone to contaminating the local air and water. Second of all, factories make noise. Another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. As a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. So, all these obviously will not make one"s life happier and healthier in my community.
From the other side, I believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. First of all, it will bring new job opportunities. Many specialists will be required to work there. Second of all, I think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. So, some old pipes may be changed. Another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.
However, I do not think that listed above benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. From my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people"s health.
Model Answer 2:
New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.
I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.
Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To
accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.
I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.
A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.
雅思写作冲刺之写作语法及句型篇2
Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students.
Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
Model Answer:
People learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university education should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection. Bellow I will give some of my reasons to support my position.
First of all, every person should have the chance to get a higher degree, gain new knowledge and experience. However, some people believe that higher education should be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like to make unavailable traveling for one who does not have IQ high enough.
Second of all, some young people do not do well at school but they have great personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these qualities they can get higher grades then their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine for example situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In this case a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite results.
Finally, it is a discrimination against students to make available higher education only for good ones.
So, if a student does poor and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a chance to try himself/herself at college, what to do in this case?
To sum up, I think that all young people should have the chance to get a higher education. To take or not this chance must be up to them.
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雅思写作冲刺之写作语法及句型篇3
Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Model Answer:
I can not completely agree with the statement that classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child"s success in school. In this essay I will first focus on the reasons why I agree with this statement and then list a few points why from my opinion in some cases is not true.
From the one side, classmates have a significant influence on child"s behavior and his or her success in school. First of all, children spend much time at school. Classmates have many things in common such as age, interests, homework and classes after all. So, they discuss their impressions about a new teacher, solve problems together, learn their homework, gain new knowledge and experience and even make their own discoveries. Sharing all these makes them closer. Some of them become friends and they spend after-school time together. In addition friends tend to copy each other"s habits and manners. For instance, my little sister became friends with the girl who did not have good grades at school at that time. It does not mean she could not have better grades; she just had many friends who did not care about their grades. So, when they started to spend their time together and share their interests, girl"s grades improved. They did their homework together, shared their dreams and exciting moments. From this point I must agree that classmates can change child’s attitude towards school.
From the other side, parents have a great influence on children" success in school too. For example if parents show an interest in their child"s progress and talk to him or her about the importance of learning I think their child will listen to them and do his or her best.
Personally, I believe that relationships between parents and a child play an essential role in child"s success in school. If these relationships are close and wholehearted I am sure that parents should not be afraid of bad influence from the outside.
雅思写作冲刺之写作语法及句型篇4
雅思写作7分句型分享
从句
1.名词性从句：主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句和同位语从句
A主语从句：
That引导(通常用it作形式主语)：It’s imperative that the government should be effectively involved in the comprehensive management of both public and private schools.政府有必要有效地参与到公立和私立学校的管理中来。
What引导：What we emphasize is that formal examination is harmful to students" creativity.我们强调的是考试对学生的创造力有害。
B表语从句
The great contribution of public school is that poor students have easier access to receive education.公立学校的巨大贡献是使贫困学生有了更容易获得教育的途径。
C 宾语从句
What引导：They want to imitate what they see.他们想要模仿他们看到的东西。
That引导：Other people hold that eradication of ancient buildings is the natural process of urban development.其他人认为拆除古老建筑是城市发展的自然进程。
D 同位语从句
Prejudice against women violates the fundamental principle that all people are created on equal terms.对妇女的偏见违反了人生来都是平等的基本原则。
2. 形容词性从句——定语从句
Nowadays, more and more people agree that smoking is an unwholesome hobby, which is equivalent to committing suicide.现在越来越多的人同意吸烟是一个不健康的爱好，它等同于自杀。
3. 副词性从句——状语从句
状语从句包括时间、地点、原因、目的、结果、条件、比较、让步等。
简单句
1.分词做状语或定语分词有两种形式：现在分词和过去分词
Living far from home, one would suffer from loneliness and homesickness.离家生活，人们遭受孤独和思乡之苦。
Prompted by the great leap of science and technology, work today is more demanding than it used to be.受到科技进步的促使，现在的工作比过去要求更高。
The commodities and services advertised by super stars tend to enjoy higher sales than those not advertised.由明星代言的产品和服务比没有广告的销售量更高。
2. 介词短语做状语
With the limited budget, the government is unable to invest much money in art projects.预算很有限，政府不能投资很多钱在艺术项目上。
3. 有些时候，两个或多个谓语共用一个主语
Formal examinations put great stress on students, generate an unhealthy spirit of jealousy and competition, and even bring about psychological problems.考试给学生带来很大压力，产生不良的嫉妒和竞争感，甚至带来心理问题。
插入语
经常可做插入语的表达包括：therefore, however, in the long run, to some extent, as..., for example, etc.
Students who have part-time jobs can relieve, to some extent, the economic burdens of their parents.做兼职的学生在某种程度上能减轻他们父母的经济负担。
雅思小作文中极值和倍数如何表达
最高点: reach the peak/top/highest point
Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点: reach the bottom/lowest point
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占的最多: occupy/make up/take up/account for the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占的最少: occupy/make up/take up/account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
雅思写作：连词的花式使用小作文不可少
雅思小作文：雅思范文里的小作文范文真的是棒到哭……我正确食用方式是拿出三种颜色的荧光笔一篇一片地认真分析研究。
1. 第一个颜色：用来划出所有图表题里都能用来描述数据/数据变化的单词/短语
2. 第二个颜色：用来划出特定图表题(e.g. 折线图，饼状图)里能用来描述数据/数据变化的单词/短语
3. 第三个颜色：用来划出所有用于连接的单词/短语
连词的花式使用方法是雅思小作文很重要的一部分!!!
连词的花式使用方法是雅思小作文很重要的一部分!!!
连词的花式使用方法是雅思小作文很重要的一部分!!!
重要的事情说三遍。嗯。对。
一两分钟就能看完的小作文，看完题自己先大致思考一下，范文反复读，找词勾词至少十五分钟吧，你再思考下记忆下分析下至少四五十分钟就没有啦……
然后分析完了细节看整体，在范文旁边总结出这篇文章的结构和描述数据的顺序。
看过很多很多篇之后，我们再建一个excel，统计统计重点单词/短语出现的频率，找找相似的图表题总结总结对比对比结构，然后你就会发现自己在潜移默化之下一不小心写小作文写出来就跟范文一样儿一样儿的
大作文：看脸，初战的话除了让你平时多写两篇议论文找老师改改以外也没别的准备方法了，既然不背段子就看平时积累吧……
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